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Forgiven

Song: Forgiven. Artist: Within Temptation.

Summary: Alternate Universe (AU). Dean always wanted a normal life - a family, a home, somewhere he felt safe. He breaks away from his father's obsession with venegence to start his own life. It sparks Sam's decision to also follow his dreams of going to college. But, will the danger follow? Warning: Tissues will be needed.
Basically, Dean is "Sam" and I re-wrote the pilot episode of Supernatural, My Way!*

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Awww, you were right, tissues were definitely needed - i think you broke me as well as Dean! Good job though.

#1 - Twiglet - 11/18/2007 - 03:05

Wow, I don't think a video ever made me cry before. It was just so...well, sad. [note: Before I had a chance to be sad, I was squeeing over the Dean/Layla. Finally, a video with my favorite SPN couple.]

#2 - Nikki - 11/18/2007 - 03:05

Thank you both! I'm glad you liked it, though you can't say that I didn't warn you. (I'm planning a sequel in my head...)

#3 - Sensue - 11/18/2007 - 03:05

Wow ... this was just wow ... awesome job :D

#4 - Tara - 11/18/2007 - 03:06

;_; Wow: for really good editing. And damn: for making me tear up. I am so weak whenever Dean's involved. Its so sad~! Excellent work on putting this together though.

#5 - Raginvirgin - 11/18/2007 - 03:06

What is you problem with torturing my favorite character? You need therapy. Right now. You sick person you!! (LOL!) You broke him I demand you fix him at once!! Seriously Therapy! (JK--or am I?) Oh and I like this video. Very wonderful editing! Picture frames made you really get inside Dean's head. Bloody Marvelous!

#6 - Kara Zone - 11/18/2007 - 03:06

That was really nice! I liked your use of clips and it all flowed really well. I couldn't hear all the voice-overs so I was a little lost in some of the Sam moments but I liked the video a lot. Very emotional.

#7 - Crystalx - 11/18/2007 - 03:07

Yeah, I, too, was a little lost on some of it because the voiceovers were so quiet, but on the whole, I really liked this. Very creative and original storyline!

#8 - Jen - 11/18/2007 - 03:07

I thought this was very beautiful and creative. The voice-overs were hard to hear, but I got the gist of the storyline for the most part

#9 - Tnt dynamite - 11/18/2007 - 03:07

That was so sad! I agree that the VOs were a little quiet, but on the whole the storyline was great and unique. So cute at the beginning and then so sad Poor Dean! I want to hug him.

#10 - Rachiefish - 11/18/2007 - 03:08

That was a very good twist of the story. And you did really well to keep the story moving throughout the vid. A great Au idea and you did well to put it across.

#11 - Hay1ock - 11/18/2007 - 03:08

Forgiven: Dean and Layla Cec: I LOVE the way you did this with him seeing her moving in the photos! Oh, and the way you used scenes from all these different shows to tell the story was so smart! Everything really blended so seamlessly! I mean, the two houses burning down and everything! The scene manipulation is just perfect! I can tell that you put a ton of though into this!! Very impressive! Good move! Kaycee: I loved how you put the scenes in the pictures...soo cool! You told this AU story so well. The whole scene in the front yard was amazing...it really looked like the scenes went together. I also loved the ending where you had Dean talking about losing his "son." Very well edited and believable!

#12 - Bad Bad Man Awards - 11/18/2007 - 03:08

that was brilliant. Poor Dean. You are very talented. I actually thought I commented on this before but I guess not. Anyway great job. You tell the story so well. Just wondering what video editing program you use because I love the scenes in the photo frames. FANTASTIC vid. Cheers

#13 - Grimore - 11/18/2007 - 03:09


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Lyrics [Voice-Overs - BOLD]

Music Intro.
Dean:: I'm Dean. This is Sam.
Layla:: Layla.
Dean:: Will You Marry Me?
Layla:: Okay.
Couldn’t save you from the start
Dean:: Layla, what's wrong?
Layla:: I'm Pregnant
Love you so it hurts my soul
Can you forgive me for trying again
Dean:: You know, I get it.
Layla:: Get what?
Dean:: Why you're the one. Your silence makes me hold my breath
Time has passed you by

Oh, for so long I’ve tried to shield you from the world
Doctor:: I'm happy to report, you have a healthy baby boy.
Oh, you couldn’t face the freedom on your own
Sam:: You okay?
Dean:: Yeah.
Here I am left in silence

You gave up the fight
You left me behind
All that’s done’s forgiven
You’ll always be mine
I know deep inside
All that’s done’s forgiven

I watched the clouds drifting away
Still the sun can’t warm my face
I know it was destined to go wrong
Layla:: It's okay, It was just a dream. A dream.
You were looking for the great escape
To chase your demons away
Dean:: NO!!!!

Oh, for so long I’ve tried to shield you from the world
Oh, you couldn’t face the freedom on your own
Layla:: Not my child. NO!
And here I am left in silence

You gave up the fight
You left me behind
All that’s done’s forgiven
Jess:: Sam, please. Stop for a second.
You’ll always be mine
Jess:: You sure you're okay?
I know deep inside
All that’s done’s forgiven

I’ve been so lost since you’ve gone
John:: I'm so sorry. I would've done anything to protect you from that.
Why not me before you?
Dean:: So, whatever you're doing...if you could just get here. Please. I need your help, dad.
Why did fate deceive me?
Everything turned out so wrong
Dean:: So, what now?
Layla:: Goodbye, Dean.
Why did you leave me in silence?

Dean:: Sometimes, I feel like I'm barely holding it together, man.
Without you and Dad...
You gave up the fight
You left me behind
All that’s done’s forgiven
Dean:: It's my fault. There's no telling how many kids have gotten hurt because of me.
Sam:: Dean, listen. You're my brother, alright... So, whatever weight you're carrying...let me help a little bit.
You’ll always be mine
I know deep inside
All that’s done’s forgiven
Dean:: I can't remember when I had my first waking nightmare. They never made any sense to me.
Sam:: What are you talking about?
Dean:: It's my fault he's gone. So, tell me. What could you possibly say to make that alright?